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We are looking for male/female musicians who want to go places with
music. Beginners very welcome, as much as advanced players. Our goals
are to play gigs, have fun, make some cash and utmost of all, become a
great band.

So far we are made up of two people: a drummer and a singer/guitarist,
both the age of 19.

On the Facebook page and sample links we provided you will find a
collection of FOUR (4) different jam sessions (YOU DO NOT HAVE TO
BECOME A FAN TO LISTEN TO THEM!!!), neither of which are complete
songs of ours. We have chosen not to release any songs the two of us
have composed as of yet because we are looking for contributions from
future band members. The JAM SESSIONS you will find on this page are
completely improvisational, played on the spot without pretense by the
drummer and guitarist. We are looking for a second guitarist; lead
versus rhythm will be decided by song. These cheap recordings were
provided to entertain our growing fan-base until we complete the band
and were recorded almost 2 years old ago.

*THE BAND'S NAME IS SUBJECT TO CHANGE* (the singer isn't too much of a
fan of it anyway). Our genre is not defined; we plan on changing this
with a complete band. Currently leaning towards the the following
genres: Rock, pop, and funk with some RB (of the good kind), motown,
and classic rock. We are very open minded, but plan on deciding on
genres with a complete band. If you sing and play an instrument,
that's a plus (harmonizing may occur). In addition to composing,
recording, and performing our own originals we also plan on covering
music here and there from the Beatles/Rolling Stones all the way up to
contemporary bands such as the Kings of Leon/Neon Trees, although most
of what we perform and record will consist of originals. If we
complete the band quick enough, or with enough members we plan on
playing open mics and parties this summer. Must be willing to work
hard.

Looking forward to meeting  jamming with you, thanks for your
interest and time! We know this ad was a bit long. If you are not
available to audition, have some kind of url/link that we can look
at/listen to. **Please contact us at the number/e-mail provided at any
time possible to schedule an audition.** Questions and further inquiry
will be answered promptly.